Post your Rap Skillz !!!!!!!!
June-8th-2003, 10:25 PM
#61
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Originally posted by mtbfreak40
Callin out everone's name
one by one
tryin to tear up their game
Try pickin on kids like "gcs"
who cant rap
but still wanna be like me
Callin out everone's name
one by one
tryin to tear up their game
Try pickin on kids like "gcs"
who cant rap
but still wanna be like me
June-8th-2003, 10:40 PM
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if teams is what it's gonna be
than derrick is with me
no one gonna' stop me and the Blue MP3
so come one come all
who thinks they can ball?
we won't cheat like Sosa
but expect us to experience your girl's "chocha"
and if she has a decent bod'
we'll just pimp her for our next mod'
should you act like an anus
we'll just have to make you famous
can I get a woo-woo
than derrick is with me
no one gonna' stop me and the Blue MP3
so come one come all
who thinks they can ball?
we won't cheat like Sosa
but expect us to experience your girl's "chocha"
and if she has a decent bod'
we'll just pimp her for our next mod'
should you act like an anus
we'll just have to make you famous
can I get a woo-woo
June-8th-2003, 11:40 PM
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mt, since you wanna grab rhymes straight outta 8-mile,
i'll break it down b-rabbit stiz-yle,
talkin ***** creek, you wading through **** creek,
but we straight, teamin up we will defeat
man, i NEVER thought this would be a 5 page thread, im going to sit back for awhile, and let some others go at it, i am on like 4 pages already.
*btw witch, your right about the blue mp3.lmao
damn, some of us can flow in here.
i'll break it down b-rabbit stiz-yle,
talkin ***** creek, you wading through **** creek,
but we straight, teamin up we will defeat
man, i NEVER thought this would be a 5 page thread, im going to sit back for awhile, and let some others go at it, i am on like 4 pages already.
*btw witch, your right about the blue mp3.lmao
damn, some of us can flow in here.
Last edited by derrick1623; June-8th-2003 at 11:45 PM.
June-9th-2003, 11:28 AM
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FELLAS .....FELLAS......FELLAS..........
hi my name is derrick...i think that im b-rabbit.....i sound like a ******....just another freak eating the crap that we speak like a maggot.......why do i try to copy...man my ***** getting pretty sloppy.......i think that i can flow....i'm all talk and no show....i better jump in my car and be like inspector gadget and go go go ................Man take that **** out of here why do you try and follow me....stay where your at..you like to look at my rear, lights that is..i give you 2 lengths and you still cant catch me at the track.........and now the little bitchdoktor...i mean witchdoktor...talking about joining teams.......all he can think about is racing his little blue mp3....why is it he only wins when its in his dreams.......i think that you just might be like sosa......youve just been defeated and now you sit there crying thinking that youve been cheated....be a man...just quit trying take your *** and sit in the stands.....your better off just being a fan......and quit your whining about being the best before i break out my bitch slapping hand........oh wait we still have CLARK....where do i start......talking about taking a bow at the end.......you bend at the waist......is that the way you swing man......grabbing the rail...all bent over fixing to get nailed..........up in a neuce and you got the juice.....whats that all about...we all think you should stop while your ahead and quit spitting that **** out your mouth......heads all loose and duck duk goose.what the hell is this guy really a fruit loop....when did we start with the nursery rhymes.....thats all good and fine...but your out of time..take that **** back to school and learn you some better rhymes....then there was mtbfreak.........been watching to much mtv...taking rhymes from all the guests...just admit it you want to be carson daily.....so you can take there lines and say your the best.....your just like the rest...you have no chance.....run run tuck your dick and prance prance like a fairy....oh quite contreary...you want to be like the idiot on "something about mary" why do you talk about all these movies in your lame raps......your no star...man your **** is way out there...why do you try so hard.....and you say that you can battle....now whos the little bitch up **** creek without a paddle.......and last but not least ...its lost concept......your gonna get swept......oh yes and youll be the one getting burned.....sit down and watch take some notes and maybe youll learn....its all about me ....its now my turn.......so you want to see our skills......do you get off to this..is this how you get your thrills.....are you ever going to say anything that makes sence...i could give you all week, but in the end its all the same... your still a "LOST CONCEPT" still a freak with the weak **** you speak........NOW EVERYONE LISTEN UP.........WHEN YOU THINK THAT YOU HAVE SOMETHING TO SAY TO ME OR YOU THINK YOU HAVE SOME NUTS.....STEP UP TO THE PLATE AND PLEASE DONT MAKE ME WAIT TO HERE ANYMORE WEAK ****...SHOW ME YOU HAVE SOME GUTS.....................ILL KEEP PUTTING ALL YOU TO SHAME.......DAMNIT..I THINK THAT I JUST GOT INDUCTED TO THE "YOU ALL JUST GOT DISSED " HALL OF FAME..........NOW IM OUT I GOT POLICIES TO WRITE I CANT STAY HERE AND BABYSIT YOU LITTLE KIDS ALL DAMN NIGHT....................
SEE YA...........
SEE YA...........
June-9th-2003, 03:11 PM
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Obviously, everyone, the main goal you can't see,
Tryin to substitute length for good quality.
Although I spit for less time, I'm quotin only me,
While everybodys throwin lines from Pac and Biggy.
5 pages of rapping, and not one good verse,
Its so funny, you're all caught up in the curse,
Just be thankful your in the ER seein the nurse,
It could be worse, you could become friends with the hearse.
Im typin really fast now, clickin the mouse,
My rhymes are like sodium and with air you douse.
The best part of this is when I hafta leave my house,
You'll all stare at my lines, and all I hear is WOWs.
BTW- I'll watch with Derrick for a little bit until somebody else steps up.
Tryin to substitute length for good quality.
Although I spit for less time, I'm quotin only me,
While everybodys throwin lines from Pac and Biggy.
5 pages of rapping, and not one good verse,
Its so funny, you're all caught up in the curse,
Just be thankful your in the ER seein the nurse,
It could be worse, you could become friends with the hearse.
Im typin really fast now, clickin the mouse,
My rhymes are like sodium and with air you douse.
The best part of this is when I hafta leave my house,
You'll all stare at my lines, and all I hear is WOWs.
BTW- I'll watch with Derrick for a little bit until somebody else steps up.
June-9th-2003, 04:19 PM
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PATHETIC
CLARK CLARK CLARK........
WITH ALL THESE RYMES AND YET YOU STILL FIND THE TIME TO SPIT THIS "****" WHY DO YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE TO SHAME YOUR NAME........EVERYTHING AND EVERY RHYME YOU SAY CONTINUES TO BE LAME.........I DONT HAVE TO WRITE A BOOK..GIVE THIS A LOOK......NOT ONE GOOD VERSE...I THINK YOU HAVE THE CURSE....NOW LOOK WHOS THE WORSE....HERE ILL USE YOUR ****......I HAVE PLENTY OF FRIENDS.....I EVEN FUCKED THAT NURSE.....OH THAT WAS YOUR MOTHER DAMN NOW SHES DEAD IN THE HEARSE...YOU SHOULD JOIN HER 6 FOOT UNDER, CUZ YOUR LITTLE BICTH *** JUST GOT HIT WITH THE THUNDER...DONT **** WITH ME....ILL STARE AT YOUR LINES WHILE IM STEALING YOUR CAR FROM IN FRONT OF YOUR HOUSE......THEN THATS WHEN YOULL BE HEARING WOW.....WHERED MY CAR GO NOW.........YOUR LIKE A FISH OUT OF WATER.....FLOP FLOP FLOP.........COME UP FOR AIR...STEP TO THIS ......YOU DONT EVEN ******* DARE.........
SEE YA,
WITH ALL THESE RYMES AND YET YOU STILL FIND THE TIME TO SPIT THIS "****" WHY DO YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE TO SHAME YOUR NAME........EVERYTHING AND EVERY RHYME YOU SAY CONTINUES TO BE LAME.........I DONT HAVE TO WRITE A BOOK..GIVE THIS A LOOK......NOT ONE GOOD VERSE...I THINK YOU HAVE THE CURSE....NOW LOOK WHOS THE WORSE....HERE ILL USE YOUR ****......I HAVE PLENTY OF FRIENDS.....I EVEN FUCKED THAT NURSE.....OH THAT WAS YOUR MOTHER DAMN NOW SHES DEAD IN THE HEARSE...YOU SHOULD JOIN HER 6 FOOT UNDER, CUZ YOUR LITTLE BICTH *** JUST GOT HIT WITH THE THUNDER...DONT **** WITH ME....ILL STARE AT YOUR LINES WHILE IM STEALING YOUR CAR FROM IN FRONT OF YOUR HOUSE......THEN THATS WHEN YOULL BE HEARING WOW.....WHERED MY CAR GO NOW.........YOUR LIKE A FISH OUT OF WATER.....FLOP FLOP FLOP.........COME UP FOR AIR...STEP TO THIS ......YOU DONT EVEN ******* DARE.........
SEE YA,
June-9th-2003, 06:53 PM
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ok runner
your posts look like a children's bed time book
half your rhymes have been stolen you crook
you think you can drop a killer line
but all you do is nothing but whine
you call derrick a rabbit?
your right....he multiplies out of habbit
never saw such rhymes so weak
your like a roof with a leak
what's worse.....your rhyming or your car?
your so many strokes behind par
I thought I knew you P5RUNNER
you were in that movie....dumb and dumber
your posts look like a children's bed time book
half your rhymes have been stolen you crook
you think you can drop a killer line
but all you do is nothing but whine
you call derrick a rabbit?
your right....he multiplies out of habbit
never saw such rhymes so weak
your like a roof with a leak
what's worse.....your rhyming or your car?
your so many strokes behind par
I thought I knew you P5RUNNER
you were in that movie....dumb and dumber
June-10th-2003, 12:41 AM
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Hahahahahahahahaha we got a mad rapper P5Runner trying to take on everyone.
P5Runner your skills are wack\
You don’t even know what your talking about and where you at\
You need to be slapped with someone’s ***** sack\
It’s funny to me how you try to challenge the best\
Take you’re a$$ to American Junior Idols where they will accept that weak shyt and put this lil game to rest\
Karma comes around and you already failed my test\
Clark I thought your foolish a$$ was already left in the dark\
You come at me with this joke and you don’t even have a spark\
You even said “I can hear it right now, 'Not Clark again,'”\
Because your skills lyrically are wack that you didn’t even begin\
You got to visualize the realism of the actuality\
Your Carrier is over…. You lost your longevity\
Yo Derrick
I see trembling from the catastrophe that’s about to happen\
For the penalties you have requested for your weak *** methods of rappin\
I see you failed to back down and consist to frown\
I just put your lyrics where they need to be bound\
I am calling you out in the ring in this battle\
Knocking you out easily this shyt isn’t a hassle\
You keep repeating the same frail a$$ hooks\
Your just in it for bad looks\
But your shook like mobbdeep said just like a half way crook\
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Getting Extremely Sleepy So I Probaly Have Tons of Typos
P5Runner your skills are wack\
You don’t even know what your talking about and where you at\
You need to be slapped with someone’s ***** sack\
It’s funny to me how you try to challenge the best\
Take you’re a$$ to American Junior Idols where they will accept that weak shyt and put this lil game to rest\
Karma comes around and you already failed my test\
Clark I thought your foolish a$$ was already left in the dark\
You come at me with this joke and you don’t even have a spark\
You even said “I can hear it right now, 'Not Clark again,'”\
Because your skills lyrically are wack that you didn’t even begin\
You got to visualize the realism of the actuality\
Your Carrier is over…. You lost your longevity\
Yo Derrick
I see trembling from the catastrophe that’s about to happen\
For the penalties you have requested for your weak *** methods of rappin\
I see you failed to back down and consist to frown\
I just put your lyrics where they need to be bound\
I am calling you out in the ring in this battle\
Knocking you out easily this shyt isn’t a hassle\
You keep repeating the same frail a$$ hooks\
Your just in it for bad looks\
But your shook like mobbdeep said just like a half way crook\
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Getting Extremely Sleepy So I Probaly Have Tons of Typos
June-10th-2003, 12:51 AM
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I see everyone wants a piece of me !!!!!
I am sleepy and still holding my own MUHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
Time to show the true skillz and shut some people out so bad they wont post no more raps
!!!!!! LMAO
Make some of you come back like
I walked down the street
Skipping to my feet
I seen a bat
Than i sat
Picked up a rat
Hit the cat
Ran from the cops
Got caught by officer Rops
Got in the car
Said "HAR HAR"
Went to the bar
Seen a dude and said LETS SPAR !!!!!
Thats how some of you sound to me muhahahahahahahaha
Trash talking to ever so sweet !
I am sleepy and still holding my own MUHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
Time to show the true skillz and shut some people out so bad they wont post no more raps
!!!!!! LMAOMake some of you come back like
I walked down the street
Skipping to my feet
I seen a bat
Than i sat
Picked up a rat
Hit the cat
Ran from the cops
Got caught by officer Rops
Got in the car
Said "HAR HAR"
Went to the bar
Seen a dude and said LETS SPAR !!!!!
Thats how some of you sound to me muhahahahahahahaha
Trash talking to ever so sweet !
June-11th-2003, 09:38 PM
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****, i lose the internet for two days and you claim victory...
victory, you're more like history
concept throwin his arms up, and showin his glory
but now i'm back, i got my cable going,
the whole two days i felt the tension growing
unable to post *****, and tear **** up
unable to read lines from those who suck
logged on here and went to the new threads
had to see for myself just what the dudes said
up pops up that hes the winner
only thing he wins is the best beginner.
i said i'd sit back, be the lead spectator
okay, you're the master, the masterbater
haha
victory, you're more like history
concept throwin his arms up, and showin his glory
but now i'm back, i got my cable going,
the whole two days i felt the tension growing
unable to post *****, and tear **** up
unable to read lines from those who suck
logged on here and went to the new threads
had to see for myself just what the dudes said
up pops up that hes the winner
only thing he wins is the best beginner.
i said i'd sit back, be the lead spectator
okay, you're the master, the masterbater
haha
June-12th-2003, 04:00 PM
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Feel the beat now, I'm back, did you haters miss me?
You dont gotta be mad, but I can see that you are pissy.
I'm not goin down as easy as General Lee,
It's time to knock down the door, why bother with the key
Lost Concept and Derrick, I'm surprised you've not been had,
That means that the rest of you must suck really bad.
Your skills as a rapper need to increase a tad,
Thats the final vote, and no, there are no hangin chads.
To you I'm the nightmare you fear before sleep,
And to me your the losers who's sound is cheap.
Where in the world is your vocabulary, it must be buried deep,
Because every word outta your mouth is !@&#, !&#( or BLEEP.
Superstars come from everywhere, theres one right here.
You wouldnt think it but you dont hear the sound of the cheer,
Im flyin from this joint now in my private Leer,
I'll be sippin on DP while you'll be poundin back beer.
You dont gotta be mad, but I can see that you are pissy.
I'm not goin down as easy as General Lee,
It's time to knock down the door, why bother with the key
Lost Concept and Derrick, I'm surprised you've not been had,
That means that the rest of you must suck really bad.
Your skills as a rapper need to increase a tad,
Thats the final vote, and no, there are no hangin chads.
To you I'm the nightmare you fear before sleep,
And to me your the losers who's sound is cheap.
Where in the world is your vocabulary, it must be buried deep,
Because every word outta your mouth is !@&#, !&#( or BLEEP.
Superstars come from everywhere, theres one right here.
You wouldnt think it but you dont hear the sound of the cheer,
Im flyin from this joint now in my private Leer,
I'll be sippin on DP while you'll be poundin back beer.
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