Post your Rap Skillz !!!!!!!!
#16
Ill talk smack about ya track
you just need to step back
This forum is wack
The administrators must think were on crack
sad thing is most of us can spit rhymes and were not even black.
You betta watch out 50 Cent
the proteje crew is startin to represent.
P5 or MP3, eminem you betta look out,
cuz we bring it to the 313.
now back to the topic,
your rhymes to me are microscopic
there aint no one that can stop it
this is my flow and this is how i drop it.
Haha this forum is gettin intense...this is fun though guys
you just need to step back
This forum is wack
The administrators must think were on crack
sad thing is most of us can spit rhymes and were not even black.
You betta watch out 50 Cent
the proteje crew is startin to represent.
P5 or MP3, eminem you betta look out,
cuz we bring it to the 313.
now back to the topic,
your rhymes to me are microscopic
there aint no one that can stop it
this is my flow and this is how i drop it.
Haha this forum is gettin intense...this is fun though guys
#18
TOO FAST, TOO FURIOUS
YOU LIKE THAT BEAR NOW.... YOUR CURIOUS
DID YOU MISS THAT GEORGE?
THIS AIN'T NO FORGE!
DON'T BE MAD
CAUSE' YOUR HONDA IS JUST A FAD
AND PLEASE DON'T BE HATIN' ME
WHEN YOUR GIRL BE RAPIN' ME
YOU RICER FOO'S CALL IT GHAY
DON'T MAKE ME HAVE TO HIT THE SPRAY
AND IT WAS JUST THE OTHER DAY
I HAD YOUR GIRL IN THE HAY
NO WAIT........ IT WAS IN MY PROTEGE!
J/K I DO LOVE HONDAS
YOU LIKE THAT BEAR NOW.... YOUR CURIOUS
DID YOU MISS THAT GEORGE?
THIS AIN'T NO FORGE!
DON'T BE MAD
CAUSE' YOUR HONDA IS JUST A FAD
AND PLEASE DON'T BE HATIN' ME
WHEN YOUR GIRL BE RAPIN' ME
YOU RICER FOO'S CALL IT GHAY
DON'T MAKE ME HAVE TO HIT THE SPRAY
AND IT WAS JUST THE OTHER DAY
I HAD YOUR GIRL IN THE HAY
NO WAIT........ IT WAS IN MY PROTEGE!
J/K I DO LOVE HONDAS
Last edited by Witchdoktor; June-6th-2003 at 01:26 PM.
#19
OH I'M SCARED.....AN ECLIPSE
I GOT A PLACE FOR THOSE LIPS
SO YOU THINK YOUR A PIMP WITH THAT CADILLAC
I'LL TRY YOUR GIRL OUT WHEN SHE'S GOT MORE BACK
YOU A BIG MAN WITH A BEAMER
DAMN YOUR GIRL IS ONE HELL OF A SCREAMER
AND FOR YOU BALLA WITH THE BENZ
IS JUST WHAT YOUR GIRL DOES...BENDS
AND NOW I'M AUDI
I GOT A PLACE FOR THOSE LIPS
SO YOU THINK YOUR A PIMP WITH THAT CADILLAC
I'LL TRY YOUR GIRL OUT WHEN SHE'S GOT MORE BACK
YOU A BIG MAN WITH A BEAMER
DAMN YOUR GIRL IS ONE HELL OF A SCREAMER
AND FOR YOU BALLA WITH THE BENZ
IS JUST WHAT YOUR GIRL DOES...BENDS
AND NOW I'M AUDI
Last edited by Witchdoktor; June-6th-2003 at 01:27 PM.
#20
none of your rhymes are intense,
you're trying to be like 50cent(s)
calling out the 313s and the rapper wannabes
this aint the hip hop forum
and plus your lines are borin
so wipe it off and zip it up,like you do while you're post whorin
yo,give ya mom my best regards
seen her spread out in the yard,
now stop this rap ****,get back to topic, or EDWIN calls us all FUCKTARDS!
you're trying to be like 50cent(s)
calling out the 313s and the rapper wannabes
this aint the hip hop forum
and plus your lines are borin
so wipe it off and zip it up,like you do while you're post whorin
yo,give ya mom my best regards
seen her spread out in the yard,
now stop this rap ****,get back to topic, or EDWIN calls us all FUCKTARDS!
#21
excuse me
MR. Derrick 1623
1623?
that how old your mama be?
try to hijack this thread
you might just wind up dead
I'd expect a ricer with that behavior
better watch your step before you'll need a savior
let me take a line from THE MAN
don't come here with that spam
MR. Derrick 1623
1623?
that how old your mama be?
try to hijack this thread
you might just wind up dead
I'd expect a ricer with that behavior
better watch your step before you'll need a savior
let me take a line from THE MAN
don't come here with that spam
#22
you're callin me out
without delayin' or doubt
you werent even the one that i was rappin about
but i'll take you on now,
just to show your *** how
to flow in time and lay down rhymes that knock your punk *** down
i grab my dick and **** just like i was a fountain,
you couldn't rock the crowd tossing boulders off the top of a mountain
but its all good, and its all in fun
now shut the **** up and just back off son.
lol
without delayin' or doubt
you werent even the one that i was rappin about
but i'll take you on now,
just to show your *** how
to flow in time and lay down rhymes that knock your punk *** down
i grab my dick and **** just like i was a fountain,
you couldn't rock the crowd tossing boulders off the top of a mountain
but its all good, and its all in fun
now shut the **** up and just back off son.
lol
#23
aight, aight
do your rhymes come by the bulk?
Keep it up and I'll turn meaner than the Hulk
You can't even go one round
I'm the greatest pound for pound
Why do you want to battle?
I thought you wanted to hear your baby make rattle rattle
You still want to insist?
Ok then..... one more to add on the deathlist
**dayuuuum**
do your rhymes come by the bulk?
Keep it up and I'll turn meaner than the Hulk
You can't even go one round
I'm the greatest pound for pound
Why do you want to battle?
I thought you wanted to hear your baby make rattle rattle
You still want to insist?
Ok then..... one more to add on the deathlist
**dayuuuum**
#24
okay,okay...enuf wit the ghey
yo, thats pretty low going after an unborn,
werent you just surfin the internet for ****?
you say a deathwish, its like a guestlist
you came against me and now its time to get dissed.
you talk about me not lasting one round,
but i'm coming back to shut that wack **** down.
hulk, ****, you aint hulk, bitch
you just some silly *** white boy with the hip hop itch
and while you hippity hop, i drippity drop, and take all your ladies and your spittity spot!
WHAT.
yo, thats pretty low going after an unborn,
werent you just surfin the internet for ****?
you say a deathwish, its like a guestlist
you came against me and now its time to get dissed.
you talk about me not lasting one round,
but i'm coming back to shut that wack **** down.
hulk, ****, you aint hulk, bitch
you just some silly *** white boy with the hip hop itch
and while you hippity hop, i drippity drop, and take all your ladies and your spittity spot!
WHAT.
Last edited by derrick1623; June-6th-2003 at 06:41 PM.
#25
hold up hold up
so you still want to stick around
do i need to bury yo' *** in the ground?
yeah I was surfing ****
had to watch myself perform.....I'm like a star being born
all it would take is one round in the ring
just when I make the bell go...ding ding ding
BOOYA! my rhymes are hitting you like thunder
next stop for you is six feet under
biaaatch
so you still want to stick around
do i need to bury yo' *** in the ground?
yeah I was surfing ****
had to watch myself perform.....I'm like a star being born
all it would take is one round in the ring
just when I make the bell go...ding ding ding
BOOYA! my rhymes are hitting you like thunder
next stop for you is six feet under
biaaatch
Last edited by Witchdoktor; June-6th-2003 at 07:05 PM.
#26
haha, six feet under, like a coffin?
your flows sound just like when im shitting and coughing
take that bell from out your corner, go head ring it,
wanna keep on going well ima bring it
ya know, i come on hear to read up on cars,
a way for you to be a sick rapper, get sars.
and then the doc will dose you up so you can see,
thats the only way you'll ever be doper than me.
but if you wanna come at me,i understand
just another way you're tryin to show that you're a wonder man
but if not just sease, and let this **** dispurse,
before i have to come back, and smack another verse.
your flows sound just like when im shitting and coughing
take that bell from out your corner, go head ring it,
wanna keep on going well ima bring it
ya know, i come on hear to read up on cars,
a way for you to be a sick rapper, get sars.
and then the doc will dose you up so you can see,
thats the only way you'll ever be doper than me.
but if you wanna come at me,i understand
just another way you're tryin to show that you're a wonder man
but if not just sease, and let this **** dispurse,
before i have to come back, and smack another verse.
#27
check this out check this out
I ain't gonna stop keepin' it real
how much more pain do you want to feel?
act like superman without kryptonite and just kneel
they say don't ever underestimate
but you ain't even a featherweight
plus what you bring is a little too little and a little too late
so you decided not to bail
let me just hammer you then like a nail
or have fun with ya' and smoke you like Clinton and not inhale
(your last one was my favorite yet)
I ain't gonna stop keepin' it real
how much more pain do you want to feel?
act like superman without kryptonite and just kneel
they say don't ever underestimate
but you ain't even a featherweight
plus what you bring is a little too little and a little too late
so you decided not to bail
let me just hammer you then like a nail
or have fun with ya' and smoke you like Clinton and not inhale
(your last one was my favorite yet)
Last edited by Witchdoktor; June-6th-2003 at 10:01 PM.
#28
steady talkin 'bout heros, marvel and ****
next your gonna yap about spiderman and green hornet
you bore me, rhymes getting corny
but i still sit here and listen to your fake *** stories
and what the hell you know about hammerin nails?
i got a ****** box of tools to use when i choose to straight impale.
but im on to other threads and i didnt "end up dead"
so grab the lines you spit, go back, retrace them in your head
*sidenote* im just some white boy, i cant even rap. lmao
next your gonna yap about spiderman and green hornet
you bore me, rhymes getting corny
but i still sit here and listen to your fake *** stories
and what the hell you know about hammerin nails?
i got a ****** box of tools to use when i choose to straight impale.
but im on to other threads and i didnt "end up dead"
so grab the lines you spit, go back, retrace them in your head
*sidenote* im just some white boy, i cant even rap. lmao
#29
HMMM...you might have what it takes to go more than one round
you ain't fried ham, gotta give it up... more like ground round
I'm sitting nice and cool like Bruce Banner
but you know what happens when he gets much madder
but even the coldest have a small piece of heart
like of most girls...you never hear them fart
so I will let you live to see another thread
I'll let you enjoy a taste of being newly wed'
so I offer a truce to put a hault on this fight
Did I forget to mention?.....you got a set of the meanest taillights!
(we're hogging the stage here - lol)
you ain't fried ham, gotta give it up... more like ground round
I'm sitting nice and cool like Bruce Banner
but you know what happens when he gets much madder
but even the coldest have a small piece of heart
like of most girls...you never hear them fart
so I will let you live to see another thread
I'll let you enjoy a taste of being newly wed'
so I offer a truce to put a hault on this fight
Did I forget to mention?.....you got a set of the meanest taillights!
(we're hogging the stage here - lol)
#30
Excuse me, please, let's quit this little game,
It'd be so much better if your **** wasn't lame
Oh you think I'm just kidding, you think your the best?
You'll end up eatin meals through a straw like the rest
I figure its time to jump in the brawl, show them who knows its all, before I round up the gat and give my whole crew a call.
It'll be like lightning flashin, click-click, BING
You'll look like swiss cheese, two broken legs and a sling.
And when the nights at a close, you'll be pickin your nose, while I'm chillin at the shows, later f*ckin your hoes.
BTW-- No Hard Feelings. I just enjoy this and although I suck I'd rather suck here than in public. As long as your rapping and It's iight with you, I'll counter every once in a while.
It'd be so much better if your **** wasn't lame
Oh you think I'm just kidding, you think your the best?
You'll end up eatin meals through a straw like the rest
I figure its time to jump in the brawl, show them who knows its all, before I round up the gat and give my whole crew a call.
It'll be like lightning flashin, click-click, BING
You'll look like swiss cheese, two broken legs and a sling.
And when the nights at a close, you'll be pickin your nose, while I'm chillin at the shows, later f*ckin your hoes.
BTW-- No Hard Feelings. I just enjoy this and although I suck I'd rather suck here than in public. As long as your rapping and It's iight with you, I'll counter every once in a while.