Post your Rap Skillz !!!!!!!!
June-8th-2003, 01:48 AM
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Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr !!!!!!!
That’s it ! Time to get serious !
Little Shawn is the man when it comes to a microphone/
Shock is so vice it’s deadly as Alco pone/
The way that I flow is like no other/
Messing with me is like word to your mother/
Pushing the hooked up 2002 Mazda with the forth of begets/
My flows are so hot it’s making some of you cat’s mad vexed/
Everyone knows it’s my time to shine/
My baby girl left me today but she was truly fine and divine/
I come back into the forum ready to battle with a bottle of don/
Any stagnation I raise beyond/
I am prepared from all challenges so bring it on !!!!!!!!!!!!
That’s it ! Time to get serious !
Little Shawn is the man when it comes to a microphone/
Shock is so vice it’s deadly as Alco pone/
The way that I flow is like no other/
Messing with me is like word to your mother/
Pushing the hooked up 2002 Mazda with the forth of begets/
My flows are so hot it’s making some of you cat’s mad vexed/
Everyone knows it’s my time to shine/
My baby girl left me today but she was truly fine and divine/
I come back into the forum ready to battle with a bottle of don/
Any stagnation I raise beyond/
I am prepared from all challenges so bring it on !!!!!!!!!!!!
June-8th-2003, 09:38 AM
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i'm the type to spit sixteen bars, but i might forget to breathe
loose all available oxygen,and i might just go to sleep
but you'll be having nightmares, cause i'll stomp you in my dreams
got the yellow caution tape, cause this'll be a murder scene
get some air back in my lungs and get back up for a round
watch the stuff that you bring up,because it might just knock you down
i'm ' bout tired of rappin, what i feel comes through my keys
but i'm better in person, yo, im like them killa beez
but now im calling out concept, the one who thinks he's nice
only microphone he's rockin is the one from fisher-price
and then this mtfreak, it's more like empty geek
you sure do talk alot of smack, but you'll soon feel defeat.
loose all available oxygen,and i might just go to sleep
but you'll be having nightmares, cause i'll stomp you in my dreams
got the yellow caution tape, cause this'll be a murder scene
get some air back in my lungs and get back up for a round
watch the stuff that you bring up,because it might just knock you down
i'm ' bout tired of rappin, what i feel comes through my keys
but i'm better in person, yo, im like them killa beez
but now im calling out concept, the one who thinks he's nice
only microphone he's rockin is the one from fisher-price
and then this mtfreak, it's more like empty geek
you sure do talk alot of smack, but you'll soon feel defeat.
June-8th-2003, 02:14 PM
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Derrick1623 thinks he battle it out wit me
even though what you spit is kiddie
your rhymes are weak
i may be be a mtb freak but your the geek.
You say your a killa bee,
more like a bumble bee
stung once and now it sounds like your dead to me.
i dont think its that you forget to breath
its that my rhyme is a death squeeze
I can talk smack
because no matter what you say
i can answer back.
Now dont get pissed
just because you got dissed
you came sneakin through the mist
but you ran straight into my fist.
this rhyme is over
your now dismissed.
even though what you spit is kiddie
your rhymes are weak
i may be be a mtb freak but your the geek.
You say your a killa bee,
more like a bumble bee
stung once and now it sounds like your dead to me.
i dont think its that you forget to breath
its that my rhyme is a death squeeze
I can talk smack
because no matter what you say
i can answer back.
Now dont get pissed
just because you got dissed
you came sneakin through the mist
but you ran straight into my fist.
this rhyme is over
your now dismissed.
June-8th-2003, 02:29 PM
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Its my last time in the ring and i'll be hittin the bell,
When its done I'll be on top and you'll be back in hell.
Everyones copyin each other, thinkin your Nelly-Nell,
Copy me, you'll get a gift, my 9 milli shell.
Let me pick out some beefs I got wit you peeps,
Lets start wit Derrick who thinks hes Keanu Reeves,
Well I'm Agent Smith then, with the cool new shades,
Next time me and you battle, just know I got upgrades...
Yo MTB, you ain't no superhero.
I'll burn you like my CDs when I'm using Nero...
And for you Lost Concept, with your chick you had your chance,
She left you in a minute, without a second chance,
Your a no-one, a fool, a puny little punk,
Your just as fake as that NOS sticker on your trunk...
Well I'm makin like Limp Bizkit, and rollin from here,
Just remember I'm the winner, so applaud dont jeer
For everyone else, well this is there day,
You messed with the wrong man, C-L-A-R-K.
I'm done for a while guys. Thanks for the fun.
When its done I'll be on top and you'll be back in hell.
Everyones copyin each other, thinkin your Nelly-Nell,
Copy me, you'll get a gift, my 9 milli shell.
Let me pick out some beefs I got wit you peeps,
Lets start wit Derrick who thinks hes Keanu Reeves,
Well I'm Agent Smith then, with the cool new shades,
Next time me and you battle, just know I got upgrades...
Yo MTB, you ain't no superhero.
I'll burn you like my CDs when I'm using Nero...
And for you Lost Concept, with your chick you had your chance,
She left you in a minute, without a second chance,
Your a no-one, a fool, a puny little punk,
Your just as fake as that NOS sticker on your trunk...
Well I'm makin like Limp Bizkit, and rollin from here,
Just remember I'm the winner, so applaud dont jeer
For everyone else, well this is there day,
You messed with the wrong man, C-L-A-R-K.
I'm done for a while guys. Thanks for the fun.
June-8th-2003, 03:09 PM
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Derrick1623 how dare you attempt to contest with some of the best\
MtbFreak40 shut you out playa so put your weak a$$ shyt to rest\
How dare you come out trying to spit\
Your flows are weak and worse as shyt\
The only nightmare you gonna have is seeing me in your dreams\
Because everything you say is only more than it seems\
If you keep this up the only yellow tape we’ll see\
Is me finishing you off speeding off in the with a car no lower than 12 Vee’s\
You been Hosed Tommy, so take your Mp3 and drive off a cliff\
Your no rhyming A$$ has been officially DISMISSED\
Derrick ……
Your playing with fire and about to get burned
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!!!! I like this topic this is so fun !!!!
Some of you taking this to the extreme though, putting emotions into it LMAO !!!!!!!!!!!!
Keep them coming guys
MtbFreak40 shut you out playa so put your weak a$$ shyt to rest\
How dare you come out trying to spit\
Your flows are weak and worse as shyt\
The only nightmare you gonna have is seeing me in your dreams\
Because everything you say is only more than it seems\
If you keep this up the only yellow tape we’ll see\
Is me finishing you off speeding off in the with a car no lower than 12 Vee’s\
You been Hosed Tommy, so take your Mp3 and drive off a cliff\
Your no rhyming A$$ has been officially DISMISSED\
Derrick ……
Your playing with fire and about to get burned
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!!!! I like this topic this is so fun !!!!Some of you taking this to the extreme though, putting emotions into it LMAO !!!!!!!!!!!!
Keep them coming guys
!!!! 
June-8th-2003, 06:20 PM
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eh yo, concept, you must be truely lost in the head,
because i'll be goddamn, your saying the same **** that i said.
i'm may be playin in fire, but you're cold as ice
and i aint talkin about diamonds, im speakin of the **** you think's nice
i cant believe this cat, comin up against me,
only dismissed you give is if you went on mtv
cause you cant defeat me, sure as hell can beat me
you only wish you had an mp3, cause then you'd be like me
but you're not, and you wont ever be
because my rhymes are too intricate, and too clever "g".
and here comes mtb, tryin to go 'gainst me,
thinkin hes the baddest hardest dude since die hard 3.
but you aint like bruce, you better call the truce,
before you end up in slings and traction drinkin through an I.V.
rofl
because i'll be goddamn, your saying the same **** that i said.
i'm may be playin in fire, but you're cold as ice
and i aint talkin about diamonds, im speakin of the **** you think's nice
i cant believe this cat, comin up against me,
only dismissed you give is if you went on mtv
cause you cant defeat me, sure as hell can beat me
you only wish you had an mp3, cause then you'd be like me
but you're not, and you wont ever be
because my rhymes are too intricate, and too clever "g".
and here comes mtb, tryin to go 'gainst me,
thinkin hes the baddest hardest dude since die hard 3.
but you aint like bruce, you better call the truce,
before you end up in slings and traction drinkin through an I.V.
rofl
Last edited by derrick1623; June-8th-2003 at 06:26 PM.
June-8th-2003, 06:27 PM
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Originally posted by lost_concept
Derrick ……
Your playing with fire and about to get burned
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Derrick ……
Your playing with fire and about to get burned
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June-8th-2003, 08:18 PM
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I can hear it right now, 'Not Clark again,'
While you were fearin me, I was wit paper and pen,
Just writin down the lines on a desk in the den,
If all this was judged, I'd get a 13 outta 10.
People are gettin all defensive at the lines that I throw,
You dont gotta write back, just you get up and you go,
Thats that way you want it, fine you can stoop that low,
Just now that I'll be takin bows at the end of the show.
I always hit wit the fury of 2 12's with juice,
Start with me again and your head will end up loose.
Your rhymes resembles the caliber of duck, duck, goose,
Lay another stupid rhyme and you'll be up a in neuce.
Im ready to take some heat, throw whatcha got at me, I'll hit it back faster than the Cub's Sammy. If only you all could see, how pathetic ya'll do be, you would run to your home, get your bags and you'd flee.
Be ready this time, for when I pull out the nine, you'll see the barrel shine while your crew start dyin.
While you were fearin me, I was wit paper and pen,
Just writin down the lines on a desk in the den,
If all this was judged, I'd get a 13 outta 10.
People are gettin all defensive at the lines that I throw,
You dont gotta write back, just you get up and you go,
Thats that way you want it, fine you can stoop that low,
Just now that I'll be takin bows at the end of the show.
I always hit wit the fury of 2 12's with juice,
Start with me again and your head will end up loose.
Your rhymes resembles the caliber of duck, duck, goose,
Lay another stupid rhyme and you'll be up a in neuce.
Im ready to take some heat, throw whatcha got at me, I'll hit it back faster than the Cub's Sammy. If only you all could see, how pathetic ya'll do be, you would run to your home, get your bags and you'd flee.
Be ready this time, for when I pull out the nine, you'll see the barrel shine while your crew start dyin.
June-8th-2003, 09:08 PM
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Look now your all shook
YOur rhymes are sh*tty like a bad crook.
Whats up with your obbsesion with men
always talking about famous actors
you'll never be like them
Now i know its hard for you to get them off your mind
but your rhymes are like dreams
you'll never shine
Mr. Die Hard 3
you try hard but still can't succeed
Sayin i should call a truce
dont worry
im not tryin to steal your man Bruce
Callin out everone's name
one by one
tryin to tear up their game
Try pickin on kids like "gcs"
who cant rap
but still wanna be like me
You talk about crushin people in their dreams
the only thing your gonna hear is screams
why dont you give up, your dismissed
your rhymes don't make me pissed
i just laugh it off because i know
im not the one thats a little BI*TCH
YOur rhymes are sh*tty like a bad crook.
Whats up with your obbsesion with men
always talking about famous actors
you'll never be like them
Now i know its hard for you to get them off your mind
but your rhymes are like dreams
you'll never shine
Mr. Die Hard 3
you try hard but still can't succeed
Sayin i should call a truce
dont worry
im not tryin to steal your man Bruce
Callin out everone's name
one by one
tryin to tear up their game
Try pickin on kids like "gcs"
who cant rap
but still wanna be like me
You talk about crushin people in their dreams
the only thing your gonna hear is screams
why dont you give up, your dismissed
your rhymes don't make me pissed
i just laugh it off because i know
im not the one thats a little BI*TCH
June-8th-2003, 09:18 PM
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alright now clark, makin sense wit remarks
shot out your light while you were at that desk, now you're alone in the dark
you can get your pen, and your little paper
comin against me, you must be a risk taker
but lets keep on rappin, get the olympics started
you could win in a honda, but you'd still be retarded.
up in a nuice, this aint no goddamn ho-down,
i done broke it down slow, i done gave you the low-down
you'll be takin the heat, i'll set the place on fire
your last was your best verse, guess it's time you retire.
now the bar's been set, ain't no room for the weak,
just got your *** handed to you by the lryical bluestreak.
shot out your light while you were at that desk, now you're alone in the dark
you can get your pen, and your little paper
comin against me, you must be a risk taker
but lets keep on rappin, get the olympics started
you could win in a honda, but you'd still be retarded.
up in a nuice, this aint no goddamn ho-down,
i done broke it down slow, i done gave you the low-down
you'll be takin the heat, i'll set the place on fire
your last was your best verse, guess it's time you retire.
now the bar's been set, ain't no room for the weak,
just got your *** handed to you by the lryical bluestreak.
June-8th-2003, 10:07 PM
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Whats wrong derrick
are you gettin hysteric
Im through with you
You cant battle
Your up sh*ts crick
and you forgot your paddle
I guess since you didn't answer back
my rhymes hit you like cancer
spread to your head
and you realized you started out weak
but now your just dead.
Now clark dont make me start
i thought you were smart
but your really just a retard
when i battle its a slow start
the heats build up
and i wait for a spark
now i got a fire to tend
and since you all burnt out
this battles come to an end
Yo this is all for fun, dont take anything seirous
who ever said teams, im down with that
lets try to start that shi*t
are you gettin hysteric
Im through with you
You cant battle
Your up sh*ts crick
and you forgot your paddle
I guess since you didn't answer back
my rhymes hit you like cancer
spread to your head
and you realized you started out weak
but now your just dead.
Now clark dont make me start
i thought you were smart
but your really just a retard
when i battle its a slow start
the heats build up
and i wait for a spark
now i got a fire to tend
and since you all burnt out
this battles come to an end
Yo this is all for fun, dont take anything seirous
who ever said teams, im down with that
lets try to start that shi*t